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WritingWithWater's avatar

that is beautiful

Dean M's avatar

Thank you so much 🙏🏼❤️

Petra's avatar

Beautiful. A true love letter. <3

Dean M's avatar

Thank you Petra. I just felt that way, I feel that way often as it is kind of a “repetitive” feeling … (“love never left”)…

Petra's avatar

And you never fail to share this “repetitive feeling” in different lights and colors. <3

Dean M's avatar

🤷🫶🏼

tsunimee's avatar

J'adore ☁️x

Dean M's avatar

merci ma puce 🤗🫶🏼x

Christopher Van Name's avatar

True love is repetition.

Untamed Eulogy's avatar

Such poignant and heartfelt piece ,Dean!!! The repetition makes it feel like a love the heart keeps returning to, no matter how hard the mind resists.

Especially “eyes open or closed… all I see is YOU. Just loveliest ❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥

Dean M's avatar

Thank you dear Ashu for your kind words! you perfectly got the point! Love always wins … remember the other poem, “Nights” - “… love never left …” ❤️🙏🏼❤️

Monica Fernandes's avatar

Great mirroring of love, eternal.

Dean M's avatar

Thank you Monica, yes indeed, it was lived, true, and it feels still (into eternity…)

I always write my reality, lived and current emotions….

Monica Fernandes's avatar

I get that. Fuel for writing, indeed. 🙏🏼

Monica A Leyva's avatar

True love for the ONE never goes away.

Dean M's avatar

That's the ultimate truth, yes 🫶🏼

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Lovely Dean!

I love the use of language (not just French) and the devotion in the poem.

And the image - as always, it is perfectly chosen.

Beautiful!

Dean M's avatar

Thank you Mark, means a lot! Well, you know already I write out of my feelings, so this one (swa swa catt) just came from my feelings the last few days, it felt strongly… et voilà…