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Gary L Taylor's avatar

A lovely drifting journey in beautiful words. I loved it.

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Beautiful Dean!

The poems flow, dissolving as the words drift down the page, guided by the formatting and the music with it - perfect.

The choice of music fits it so well, especially with the vocals and harmonies.

Wonderful!

join me in paris's avatar

Sleepless in Paris.. what a discovery at 3 in the morning

Dean M's avatar

Thank you so much! It does warm my heart to hear you like the poem and the music on top!

My poems are always (up to maybe one or two left to translate) bilingual, French and English. I am also in process of translating the stories into French as well.

You can find French “Unfolding” here:

https://deanpt.substack.com/p/unfolding-deploiement-18e

Thank you again!