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Monica A Leyva's avatar

Dean, There is something deeply moving about the way this poem blurs the boundary between the human and the divine. Whether the “You” is God, a beloved, or both at once, the repetition of You becomes a litany of steadfast presence. My favorite turn is, “You remind me of all the good within me when all I can see are my flaws.” That is one of love’s truest ministries—to hold a vision of us until we are able to see it ourselves. . The musical arrangement with the soft piano adds emphasis to each word spoken. Beautifully heartfelt. Monica

Marie Terre's avatar

Oh dear you, I am happy you do! ❤️❤️❤️

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